22. If a student only cares about money, he will lead to be unhappy all his life.
改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.
23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.
改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.
24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.
改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.
25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.
改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.
26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.
改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.
27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.
改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.
28. What's about nonsmokers?
改进: What about nonsmokers?
29. Why not to be a non-smoker?
改进: Why not be a non-smoker?
30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.
改进: Everyone has friends in his life.
31. I am not good at maths, but English
改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.
32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?
改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?
33.It is children who clear about their interests.
改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.
34. I agree the latter idea.
改进: I agree with the latter idea.
35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.
改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.
36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.
改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.
37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.
改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.
38. No one knows all the things.
改进: No one knows everything.
39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.
改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.
40. Each form of having friends has its advantages
改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.
41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.
改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply
42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.
改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.
43. They will learn the bad habits.
改进: They will develop bad habits.
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