您的位置: 首页 >> 英语学习 >> 英文写作 >> 正文

雅思写作范文—旅游类作文(附例) 

  本文要点:雅思,写作,范文,旅游,作文  会员收藏推荐给好友 

写在前面:没想到旅游的题目能出到这么难,想不偏/离题都难。据我了解多数人写偏了或者自己不知自己写了什么。这道题必须锁定下面两个要点:

    1、 这是由不同文化背景的人去他国旅游而得到的understanding和引起的tension,忽略国际旅游或不同文化均以离题处置,英语高手可凭TASK1得高分换得最后得分5;

    2、 这是argumentation的D型题, tension 和understanding 两方面都必须提及,只说一方面而不提另一方均以偏题处置,程度高者可得5分。

    作文的评分标准首条:answering the question accurately 跟英语表达水平的高低没多大关系,这次是否会大开"杀戒"呢?普通考生,尤其是高中生该有什么对策呢?等这次outcome出来后再来斟酌。(附范文)

-----------广州仲恺雅思培训中心老师赖劲松。

    International tourism now is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, it creates tension rather than understanding between the peoples from different cultures.

    To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above opinion?

    ----------argumentation-----totally 353 words-------------------

    Tourism can create jobs and other opportunities for almost all communities. Therefore, Governments worldwide have worked out many incentives aimed at developing overseas market. Personally I believe, tension is always accompanied with influxes of foreign visitors, which has already overshadowed understanding achieved via travel. (44words)

    Let me start by talking about the tension brought by international tourism. Last Independence Day Festival , I , followed by a couple of friends, traveled to a small county located in Bolivia. Surprisingly we happened to see thousands of people singing and dancing on the street. Three guys dressing in local costume swayed badly towards us, bringing drinking beer for us. Owing to our arrival in a totally new place, we declined to take any alcohol in case of being entrapped. Unexpectedly quarrels occurred as a consequence of language barrier. What's worse, one of them spitted on us, whose behavior turned our journey to be a trip of humiliation and resentment. As a matter of fact, the local residents were celebrating yearly Beer Festival. Our refusal was regarded as a bad manner to look down upon them. For this reason, I would infer that international tourists usually spend only one or two days staying in the same place. It is impossible for them to thoroughly have a good knowledge of the local culture. Consequently misconception and disputes happen frequently between peoples embodied with varied culture backgrounds. (185 words)

    Now let me turn to the discussion of understanding gained on the tour. Generally a western tourist is fond of visiting different places with exploring different customs, particularly those primitive cultures in remote mountainous areas. Such an exploration can expose himself with more opportunities of communicating with local people, which might be considered as a good way to better understand the local culture. However, different interpretation and religion eventually would probably lead him to conclude that those odd traditions handed down generation by generation in the destined region are no more than a superstitious belief. Such understanding does little good to maintain sound relationship between nations. (106 words)

本文共有 3 页,当前在第 1 页[1] [2] [3] 
范文库(FwKu.Net)致力于提高您的应用文写作水平,仅应是您日常生活中的辅助工具。站内文章仅供您参考之用,请注重自身能力的提高!

编辑:玲玲 作者:本站整理 时间:2007-6-18 14:36:00 来自:

上一篇文章 上一篇文章: 雅思写作范文参考:题目—群教还是因材施教
下一篇文章 下一篇文章: 雅思写作范文:Which source is more important?
满世界搜索 全中国搜索 站内搜索
热门搜索:党会 企业管理 学习心得 计划 简历 调查报告 实践 总结 论文
本文相关文章
· 四六级写作便于引用的36个经典谚
· 英语作文写作学习法
· 教师自荐书范文
· 教师自荐信范文
· 优秀团员自荐书范文
本站推荐文章
·自荐书的写法(精/简)
·全国高校大学名称大全中英文对照
·各类公司,厂家,商店,银行,商铺,餐
·计算机常用英语词汇表
·学好英语的42个经典要诀
·倡议书的书写方法、格式以及组成
·英语国际标准音标发音、口形、发
·倡议书的概念、特点和作用
·英语考试作文写作绝招大全(强烈推
·经典、动人的爱情自我检讨书 [4篇
热门点击文章
英语国际标准音标发音、口形、发
我的职业生涯规划书范文参考
学生夜不归寝、夜不归宿检讨书 (
大学生党课学习总结范文 (精)
写自荐信需要注意的几个问题
会计人员应聘个人简历
自我评价最好简洁得当
作风建设年 心得体会范文
实用个人简历表格
大学生违纪检讨书
本站推荐

范文库版权申明:除部分特别声明不允许转载的文章,以及授权我站独家播发的文章外,大家可以自由转载我站的文章。但我站原创文章的作者以及来自我站的链接必须保留(非我站原创的,请按照来源自行链接)。文章版权归原作者所有,敬请尊重作者版权!

转载要求:转载之图片、文件,请勿盗取链接到本站,且不准抹去我站点水印。

特别注意:本站所提供的论文,技术文档等如需使用,请与原作者联系,版权归原作者所有。

您的评论
会员名: 口令:匿名 ·注册 ·忘记密码?
说明:注册会员可以参与评论,您也可以匿名方式评论。如您不是本站会员,亦可注册为会员。
注意:文章中的链接、内容等需要修改的错误,请用报告错误及时反馈,以利于文档及时修改。
评论内容:(最多300个字符)
 注意:请不要在评论中添加与内容无关的广告链接,违者封IP。  查看评论
敬请注意:
·不良评论烦劳及时报告管理员,以利于管理员及时删除。
·尊重网上道德,遵守中华人民共和国的各项有关法律法规。
·承担一切因您的行为而直接或间接导致的民事或刑事法律责任
·本站评论管理人员有权保留或删除其管辖评论中的任意内容。
·您在本站发表的作品,本站有权在网站内转载或引用。
·参与本评论即表明您已经阅读并接受上述条款。
  浏览:   
站点最新文章
UUCall免费送话费,最多可以拿60分
美国各种各样的party
英语国家概况精讲系列第八部分
英语国家概况精讲系列第七部分
英语国家概况精讲系列第六部分
美国传统节日大盘点:主打圣诞节
英语国家概况精讲系列 第五部分
英语国家概况精讲系列 第四部分
透视1500年英语崛起历程(兼评“中
英语脑筋急转弯(2)